I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hello Hinerau I like the yellow border around your bubble. I love what you do with your mum and do stuff at home. I was thinking you move the first speech bubble so I can see it all. From Lily-Anne
Hi my name is Chloe i'm from New Brighton Catholic school. I like to go running as well, threw the Travis Wetlands with my dad. And maybe next time you could move the speech bubble so everyone can see what you have done.And you explaned your self really well. Kind regardes Chleo.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something I have done well. Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Hello Hinerau
ReplyDeleteI like the yellow border around your bubble.
I love what you do with your mum and do stuff at home.
I was thinking you move the first speech bubble so I can see it all.
From Lily-Anne
Thank you for your comment I know that I had to move the speach bubble
ReplyDeleteby HInerau
Hi my name is Chloe i'm from New Brighton Catholic school. I like to go running as well, threw the Travis Wetlands with my dad. And maybe next time you could move the speech bubble so everyone can see what you have done.And you explaned your self really well.
ReplyDeleteKind regardes Chleo.